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n, x, y, z from the Sestina by ~Litteratura:iconLitteratura:



(n, x, y, z) x 6



(Ch. 1: Illusions)

She walked between the broken glass, final
words already on her lips. Poised for the final
dive at my throat. The sussurous flow of words
I heard, drove the steeper cold a little deeper.

(Ch. 2: Knowledge)

Jades of ices, crystalline over my heart. No words
to explain. Nothing detains the inevitable. Clinical
steel pries open my eyes. What wise parody did you
offer me? The ultimatum of breathing felt so final.

(Ch. 3: Desire)

Outside your world, hurled between warm and senseless,
The stupor of sleep breaks down each and every word
that occurred amid the penumbras of perhaps. Mishaps
and slick streets echo with our last lingering words.

(Ch. 4: Love)

Yet the sun stretches its rays every morning. Night
always passes along with the chill. Defenseless
once more, remembering the thrill of your lies,
I falter in favor of being altered senseless.

(Ch. 5: Life)

Returned with the light, hacking out a scream
long diminished, she reached past me for the night.
With hands too thin, opalescent skin, and silent
within her white shame, she faded back to night.

(Ch. 6: Confusion)

In the cold and empty bed, the crevice where you
used to lie looks intended and inviting. The dream
of you still stands aside, a bride with broken diamonds
for her prize. Nothing matters but the final scream.
©2008 ~Litteratura
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See "The Sestina" for explanation.

Chapters inserted.

Okay... this one is hard to explain. I wrote the poem for Section 4 based on a mathematical rhyme derived loosely from the Sestina.

(n, x, y, z) is the ending word for each of the 4 lines of the stanza. Where n = the stanza number, x = (n + 1)/2, y = n x 2, z = n - 1. Each number is its one ending word. Half numbers are rounded up and then rhymed with that number. So stanza two, x = 0.5 so it will rhyme with the word for 1.

The stanzas come out to this pattern:
1, 1, 2, 0
2, 0.5, 4, 1
3, 2, 6, 2
4, 2.5, 8, 3
5, 4, 10, 4
6, 4.5, 12, 5
Since the poem is only 6 stanzas there are no second words for 8, 10 or 12. (And obviously not for 0.)

Yeah, I know, its complicated. Just enjoy the concept and poem.

Influence: Breathe into Me - Red

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=flyinghamsterofdoom:iconflyinghamsterofdoom: Apr 24, 2008, 2:28:49 PM
The fact that I'd never heard of this form before, makes me love it even more. It's great on it's own, and the concept makes it even more interesting. I think I like this one best of all.

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~Litteratura:iconLitteratura: Apr 24, 2008, 3:08:45 PM
You never heard of it before because I made it up! Glad you like it.

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=flyinghamsterofdoom:iconflyinghamsterofdoom: Apr 24, 2008, 4:48:12 PM
Hahaha. That makes it all the better. I love all your work. Now if only you'd make more for me to see. You die hard fan(s) demand it. :P

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